How Are You?

Yeah, kinda not so good for my first post after being gone awhile...

So, how are you?

I really want to know

But I'm sure that I already do

I see you hanging with friends

Goofing off

And posting videos on Youtube

You seem fine to me

Like nothing even affected you

Oh, how am I?

I'm okay

I still think about you...too often

Still see your face...though I don't want to

Sure, I laugh

And am truly happy at times

But at the end of the day

I still think of you

It's f*****g annoying you know!

While your out having a good time

And acting like nothing ever happened

Like we never met

I'm sitting here in the dark

Feeling like s**t with a wounded heart

So, I really want to know

As I sit here slowly dying inside...

How are you?

Reviews

[Manda]

awww this was a great write! i am sorry if this has happened to you, but i promise you it does get better in the end. yes i actually have felt this way before too....and i think my ex is feeling like this right now because i am just like this guy (only im a girl) having fun while my ex is so depressed and wounded. this was great 100/100! KEEP IT UP!

[Sevendayspast]

I really like this !! :D Its true too, many people don't see that at the end of the day your hurt. they just see the fake facade you put on during the day. Nothings worse then being the only one hurt, or unsure if they are. anyway I liked it :).

-Chuck W.

[Charlie]

gosh, do i know this feeling. a good write, keep it up. but next time, try not to make me remember such sadness. :]] haha

[Crusaderscross]

This peom is really good I find. I actually feel that the subject is just there letting life pass by, looking back. It is actually quite sad, my take anyway. The subject seems content on staying in the past. I may be way off.

[Hailey]

absolutely amazing. very easy to relate to, a great poem in general. you can definitely feel the anger, the pain, and every other emotion put into this. great job

[Kevin]

Great read. I could feel the pure emotion in it. And if it did happen to you keep your head up things will get better.

[Ada Pacia]

Great! I enjoyed reading it till the end. =)

[Jenny Nelson]

Well, I'm sure lots of folks have been here. Know I sure have. Very well expressed emotion and very clear message. The sarcasm fits the piece really well. Nice job!

[Krazy On The Outside]

Wow, I really love this piece. I am able to identify with it well. I'm having the same feeling at the moment.
Great work! =)