When

If things were real, you'd be here
If things went right, you'd be near
If I was strong, we'd be forever
And when I am, we'll be together.

Reviews

[Jennie Baron]

I love the tight structure and the symmetry of this one. So well said in four lines.

[PaleWriter]

Nice little write darlin. Put some spurs on your spirit and I think you'll do it just fine.

[Ty]

Very on point. Made me smile.

[Jester]

Wow! 44 views! I'm so excited! ^_^

Thank you everyone for your kind reviews. I'm very pleased, and appreciate it so very much.

[Richard]

Very cute

[ron]

Wow that completely awesome.

[TLK]

It's not just about you ("If I was strong"). A we has multiple personages in it. If you are strong all the time, you allow the others to be weak.