Chapter One

Christian's point of view

        Christian was wary as he took in the scene before him. No less then twenty girls, all of Jackson's ex-girlfriends, were gathered in one place, and they had alcohol. Anyone who knows Jackson knows that that is a very, very bad sign. He saw Jackson's current girlfriend, Nina, sprawled out on the ground and laughing as she tore up pictures of the two of them. "Dear God Almighty", Christian muttered. "What the hell did he do?"

Reviews

[West of Everyone]

Well to continue with the theme...I was captured, and I really cannot wait to see where you go with this. There are so many avenues, and my mind is taking off, wandering over what possibly could happen next. Good work and keep it up, but don't burn yourself out. This could turn into an amazing story! Thumbs up!

[Renee]

wow... i really like the way this came out. Just the way you put it all into words... Im looking forward to reading the rest of it.
I am looking for a review on my first book FOREVER AND EVER. Feel free to read and comment. (some material is mature) Thanks. Keep me updated on the story. =)

[Jason]

This is a very interesting start to what could shape up to be quite the story. But...I'm curious..."What the hell did he do???"

[Jules]

im intrigued :D

[Vonnie15]

Very nice start! ;-)

[Shutterbug]

This is a very good start. Kept me interested which is a compliment if you knew me. Cannot wait for more. Keep it up!

[Denni]

i really like this!!! very well written and intriguing! cant wait for more