Nothing is what it seems,Everyone is a liar no matter how much of a saint you think you are.
Like the Sun or Moon, two sides of a coin, Sneaky and Sly. Tricker is my name. My Purpose is to Deceive.So Ill play you like a fiddle just to Exceed my Desire. It's show time, with a sunny smile We'll laugh and play, become new best friends. Then when the timeis right like a viper I Strike. My Faceade is dropped to reveal the true Monster inside.My Identity is no secret nor am I hard to find, Just pick up a Mirror to reval what you try and hide.
I think you have a wonderful concept and a heavy mood in this. I think it could really benefit for a few stanza breaks. It would build more tension as you read. Really does speak the truth!
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