Love Lost

Petals weep upon the sill,

For the love lost.

For the love still.

Line crossed

Within the hour

Life cost.

Love turned sour.

I cannot take back

Our love, this day.

I cannot look back,

As we walk away. 

Reviews

[emipoemi]

Very poignant and profound. And what a killer ending. Absolutely amazing! Well done!

[Thepensiveplayer]

Quite an emotionally driven piece. It feels like the pain of separation sparks a strange sensation of movement mixed with some regret. This is a piece of yours I won't soon forget. Great job!

[...]

Quiet sad but also calming piece of poetry. Very nicely craved flow is very relaxing.