The Fighter

The Fighter

By: Jas Alejandrino Ramos

 

I am a guy whose path has been upside down

My heart has been scrolled back down to the ground

A guy that is heartbroken yet still life is unbroken

A guy that loves so much even if it hurts

A guy that failed many times but sure to fight in all times

And I am a guy that is protective, caring, loving with the people I love

And I am a guy that fights even when knocked down and shut down.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and honest words. I liked them.
"We are entangled, destined to be. Born from God’s lust,
We are all stardust……"
The above lines are a perfect closing. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

those are wonderful words and lines! thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Dark Empress]

I love this one, thank you for sharing

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

Thank you! :)

[TL Boehm]

this is wonderful, anthemic. We all need to keep fighting.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

Thank you :)

[Voice11]

This reminds me of the novel Fight Club.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

Thank you! :)

[CoraZanini]

And be the guy who continues being that guy 'cause it seems like people like you are very,very rare!

Love the style of writing

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

Awwww thank you :) that meant a lot to me

[laughinglullaby]

I found this piece very inspirational.
I love the message behind it and the overall flow was really good.
Keep up the great work :)

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

thank you! :)

[tk]

Okay, so I am kind of having a bad day. Reading this made me feel stronger. :) I simply loved this one. Very straightforward, not sugar-coated. Thank you for sharing this. Stay strong. :D

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

thank you! :)

[Ryan Gonzalez]

A positive message is definitely found in this poem. I enjoy it a lot and especially like the overall format on this. Good job :)

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

thank you! :)

[Zackery Alan Daley]

F*****G LOVED THIS. Simple, didn't try to over do it, the passion I can feel through the text, and THAT my friend is good poetry. I felt the pain in my brain. I feel for you.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

thank you! :)

[Brook]

Lovely write.
Great message like, what doesn't kill you makes you stronger.
Good job :)

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

thank you! :)