Tranquility

Sink under, let it flood in.

Arms put afloat. 

Like a weary old rose peeling its petals in exhaustion.

Be completely submerged, without a single bubble of air.

There is peace in not having to breathe.

Let sorrow fill every corner of emptiness. 

Greet the warmth of nothingness. 

Here, all is whole.

All is worthy.

Reviews

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I enjoyed reading the this piece.

So deep.

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[Francis Magnusson]

It's amazing how you were able to express such feelings succinctly! Very nice

[Millar Blake]

Sink under, let it flood in.

So much in that line alone.

[Jamestown]

Awesome piece!
Enjoyed this read, I could relate to these words.
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Jihyun Yoo]

Thank you so much! :)

[Asante]

This was eerily melancholy. I loved this piece; it being vague enough in some areas to give me double-meaning, and raw enough in other areas to feel the full effect of the words.

Great work. :)

[Jihyun Yoo]

Thank you so much, means a lot! :)

[Asante]

Hey, anytime. Keep up the stellar work. :)