......The words......

What ever be the reasons hurts me in this world,

It's all the untold words left in my heart... ... 

            Well,

Now i realize...,

The words were  all about you......

Author's Note

It's my first poetry work..

Reviews

[tyLLanI]

short but deep. struck a chord.

[Lily Mae]

Sometimes the shortest writes are the most powerful.. This is beautifully written.. "The words were all about you"...perfect...x

[Joiedevivre]

Great work. Esoteric.

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

short, sweet, and really good. It has good emotion to it. Good job on your first write!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Excellent. My first was short and sweet also

[Cynthia]

Simple, short but really beautiful and straight to the point! ! Its amazing for a first poem! Please write on! Its definitely great, you've potential! I love the dots on the ending, makes it so thoughtful!
Nice Written!

[Kyrin Grey]

Simple and beautiful . . . I love it! :)

[Vanessa Rico]

Simple and beautiful!

[angelina]

love it...