She-rewritten

Who is she

Written by me

She is beautiful
She smiles
She's got love in
Her eyes
She's classy
She's kind
She's a friend
She's mine

Her eyes, crystal
Her teeth, white
Lips, pink
And her small jaw,
Well proportioned
Not tall,
But her spirit is


Her heart
Deep and warm
Her honesty,
Unquestioned.
She's lovely,
To you and I
Regardless of,
Who she loves.


She is love
She is beauty
She's a queen
She's mine
She's a gem
The only one of all.

Author's Note

A verse added and another tweaked

Reviews

[Connie]

very well expressed, good writing

[Phillip Francis]

Isimbabi, I feel this is a huge improvement. Are you able to see the depth that is added with the addition of the imagery you have inserted? Well done!

[Isimbabi]

I also feel it improved the poem. Thanks for reading and most of all reviewing.