Pandemonium - Senryu

A Poem by Isimbabi

I don't think this needs a description

Ragged hearts hidden

Within caves of wondrous calm-

Pandemonium

© 2021 Isimbabi

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jacob erin-cilberto

I love the paradox here, and such a well done piece. This would be identified as Senryu (same form as Haiku but not strictly about nature)---
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Ah, thank you j. I'll definitely be changing swapping out the 'haiku' with 'senryu'. Thanks for the.. read more

KeiLynn

....waiting to erupt.

That's what I think of after the word Pandemonium. Also the start of a great drama.

Posted 5 Years Ago

5 Years Ago

Haha. True!! I guess it'll make the core for a great drama.... And yes, waiting to erupt is actually.. read more

Haley

This is fantastic, great job!

Posted 5 Years Ago

5 Years Ago

Thank you, Haley. I really appreciate!!

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Added on December 11, 2020
Last Updated on January 30, 2021

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Isimbabi

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A collection of the writings that I'd allow anyone see. I don't know if I'm a creative writer or even a good one but I'm going to keep on, because... what could I loose more..