Twilight

yellow roses for my nightstand

breathed whispers by my bed

you upon my pillow

 

this you do instead

Author's Note

thought i should redeem myself ... just a little

Reviews

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This is so soft, like a gentle breeze kissing a smile upon a face...

[J]

and a lovely comment. thank you, dear.

[RachelReaper]

aw, this was so beautiful and sweet

[J]

thank you so much! :)

[Gandré]

I agree with Ken! .. a precious poem.
this wishful dreams... they also make happy.

[J]

thank you, sweet lara ......x

[Gandré]

Happy New Year, dearest Jill!! love you! xo

[Ken Simm.]

Really an exquisite jewel.

[J]

goodness. such a compliment coming from a scholarly writer such as you. :) thank you, ken.

[emmajoy]

Ahhh, so you're the one who pulls gently at the heart-strings. Tis beautiful. And needs no further comment.

[Ed Hart]

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[J]

haha -- yer gonna make me pay huh. :) i'm workin on it!

[J]

tho might have a couple more stinkers in me .....:))