dreamin'

String me a necklace

of gifts from the sea

a lunar eclipse

of liquid bound’ry

Write all your poems

on the back of your hand

and read them to me

by stardust and sand

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

very ephemeral and tranquil. beautiful words.

[MAC]

what a wonderful piece. has a 60's feel to it. excellent write.

[Penlady]

What Emma said! Beautiful and lush.

[emmajoy]

I can imagine these words being accompanied by maybe a flute playing softly in the background, a log fire, a lover, a glass of wine and smiles on two faces .. wonderful!

[Kelly Scheppers]

I love the brevity of this...it truly shows the depth of a writer when he can say so much with so little.

Your art choices rock, btw!

[Tate Morgan]

your best

[Arthur Henn]

Trying to find a favourite line. There all like a budding rose.

I'm really liking them last four lines...

A wonderful read to finish out my evening.

[PaperLife]

If only my words could flow as sweetly and beautifully as yours, then the world would be at my fingertips and I wouldn't have to fake it! Beautiful, simply there and put, like neatly filed papers or folded sweaters this is just so clean and touched.

[....]

Oh wow, this is just so wonderful. I loved that last stanza the most.
Perfect well written write.

[PaleWriter]

Perfect words that fit together like a hand in a glove. Beautiful.