happy

rosy cheeks ‘n runny nose

soggy boots ‘n frozen toes

chattering teeth ‘n quivering knees

when i dream

          tis of these

Author's Note

silliness

Reviews

[PaleWriter]

Silly maybe, but done with rhythm and style. I should know.

[Forest Green]

Oh my...snowball fights, grabbing to a passing auto's bumper and sliding along...

I liked this...! Crystalline...

[Tate Morgan]

That was really great I loved it

[Wolfwind]

Me thinks that it is a warm blanket dreaming these things, for it knows that when it snows, it shall get lots of attention from chilled toes! =)

Great Silliness Lady J!

[Ed Hart]

first she seeks 'n there she goes
walkin' toots in wonderin' clothes
traveling 'neath the moonlit trees
filled with dreams
writes with ease

[Gandré]

ah Jill, your own stillness style..
How I liked this!

[emmajoy]

Silliness is beauty when you write it .. delightful and delightful and more!

[Arthur Henn]

I wait out-side your door with a blanket and warm heart.

chattering teeth ‘n quivering knees

I'm saving this writing for the triple digit days that will soon arrive here in California this summer.

Thank You (J)

[Chris]

ever the girl... within... pretty