For You.

My supporting limbs,

They melt beneath me. 

The choir in my head sings their hymns,

And I am no longer drowning in the sea.

I have been lifted above the waves,

With my arms in the air. 

I am carried above the cliffs and caves,

I am moving far away from there.

My skin glows brighter,

As if the sun is beneath my skin. 

I love when you pull me in tighter, 

I cannot help but give in. 

I feel my heart beating in my throat,

When I catch you looking at me.

And all I desire to do is float, 

Above the waves across the sea. 

Reviews

[Candylove.]

This is epic! I love the theme of the sea, it brings the poem to greater heights and supplies beautiful imagery. Very well done! I love it. :)

[deeps]

I feel my heart beating in my throat,
When I catch you looking at me.
And all I desire to do is float,
Above the waves across the sea.

Oh Wow! I loved these lines, such an amazing flow.
This is very poetic and very well written.