Breaking

I'm slowly breaking; I'm barely there,
This pain is getting too hard to bare.
My chest is heavy; My heart is weak,
My world without you is all too bleak.

Wish you were here; Wish I was there,
Our love for each other just isn't fare.
You're the one; You're my girl,
You make my stomach tumble and twirl.

I long to see you; To kiss your lips,
Rub your cheek with my fingertips.
You're my heart; You're my soul,
You make what once was broke into a whole.

Author's Note

Short, venting. It was originally longer, but I felt it didn't flow. Maybe I'll add on. I drew the picture. woo! lol

Reviews

[-K]

Dont know why I didn't think to look at this poem before! This is a really creative piece and yes you did draw your picture. I like this piece alot. Good work :)

[Thomas Fleet]

Beautifully written!
Genius rhyme scheme with a smooth-flowing structure.
You express your feelings to the full in these words...
I hope you continue to write and never stop!
Thank you for sharing.