My First Haiku

My first Haiku I had to write for English Class. Please go easy on me (^^")

See the crazy wind 

It makes a very loud sound

Hear it from all around 

Reviews

[Eryn ♪]

it is pretty good, however the last line has one to many syllables.

[Stan Thorkin]

I don't think that your teacher taught you the right way to write haiku. It is more than a simple syllable pattern. It was good, however. Check these websites out for a bit more help:

What is a haiku?
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku

For helping on writing a haiku:
http://www.wikihow.com/Write-a-Haiku-Poem

[esperanza]

I like it .