You Loved Me?

What is love?

You said you loved me, I gave you something worth loving

You said you needed me, I gave you something worth needing

You said you missed me, I gave you something worth missing

You said you would die, I gave you something worth living

You said you would never leave me.....

Then why am I alone?

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Awwh this is soo sad! I almost started crying because I truly know how you feel dude. It sucks but you deserve better treatment than that though. Again, great job :)


Ashley Rivers-- Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Nick M.]

Yah I wasn't the happiest when I wrote this either :/ Thanks for the review!

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're welcome, and I totally understand. Most of my writings, I start off crying when writing them and in the end I smile because I realized I wrote a "true" masterpiece! I think a "true" writer is able to express theirself through any situation that life may put them through, such as yourself! Keep up the good work :)

[Nick M.]

Yes ma'am your right! All of my writings are based on real experiences and situations that I had to get through/ still trying to get through. Only time will help with that but the occasional poem helps too

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I'm glad that you agree! Haha. It's good to know that there are other writers on here that write about personal experiences that they've been through or still trying to. Yeah, music and writing is what helps me get over horrible break-ups :D

[Nick M.]

Add soccer to that list and Im right there with you

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Haha, I love soccer xD I used to play, but then I quit. Well, I played when I was in the 6th grade but I'm a Sophomore now! Ha. I'm more into basketball now though :)

[Nick M.]

thats cool basketball is my next sport after soccer. been playing soccer since I was 4 and havent stoppe

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Haha, yeah. I've thought about trying out! But I'm not sure yet. That's cool that you've been playing for so long :D

[Nick M.]

Go for it! im sure you'll make it! just like my newest poem said....Take a chance

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Awwh, thanks that's great advice! :)

[TheAdamBryant]

Because some people can't appreciate what someone does for them , this happends to many people

[Nick M.]

Yah it sucks but that's just life I guess

[TheAdamBryant]

yeah you are right