Words of Mouth

Amidst the trembling of my fears

Clear beneath the mask

The shedding of my salty tears

Is bittersweet at last.

 

Although my arms still yearn for rest

My mind is continually working

For yet another test

 

Rhythmic chants beat in my ears

Of the lunatic I’ve been since young

To think that my task is ever near

That the words will slip off my tongue

 

Fooling the heavens

Creating the world

Is all but a simple task

To create a word of mouth

You must finish writing what is to be said

Author's Note

It's supposed to not have the commas and periods and such in case you were wondering =) But critique would be greatly appreciated and tell me if you would rather the punctuation and everything in there.

Reviews

[Kyla H]

This is wonderfully written, And I was able to read it without all the punctuation.