First Love

it's a short poem about falling in love for the very first time :D

Butterflies flying around 

Hearts Beating but there's no sound

Eyes sparkling, My knees weakens at the sight of your presence

am awaken by your fragrance of love 

my hearts beating, my pulse racing 

your words am guessing, cause i wanna be with 

there is no one but you 

you've captured my heart, and there is no denying that.

Reviews

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That was very pretty:) Wow made me think of the fist time id felt love I was 8 lol and the lady I loved was an actor name Kristy Mcnichol,Lol sure ill get laughed at for that but yeah she was my first love even thow she never knew it!

[JoceMaria]

hahaha that is absolutely adorable. thank you once again for taking time out to read my writing :)

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Your very welcome I thought id never hear from you:)