Faith

Just recently got back to writing. Just a short piece

Imprisoned by these visions of sinning
Freedom is the thoughts that keep me winning
Negativity surrounds me constantly
It over shadows the positive and drags me down constantly
I see a light, small and dull
I close me eyes, pray that I will no longer be your fool

Reviews

[M P Ramesh]

joce,

Its a way for expression to look inward at the time of creation. All writings are basically inward looking only , even though visualising outer world beyond looks and horizon. The need of the time is how deep and original are the fruits of that pain. You have made it clear that thrust for freedom is utmost important.... a manifesto of writers' community .
Can I remind you words of Petofy

I will sacrifice my life for my love
but I will sacrifice my love for my freedom.

carry on..............


M P Ramesh

[JoceMaria]

In the world in which we live today it is so hard for one to truly know the true value of freedom. Freedom of choice freedom to voice.
Thank you for taking the time to read 😊