Anchor Me

Your sweet words whispered in my ear anchor me to this world
as I shatter to pieces around you
Your voice my only tether as my mind goes soaring

Reviews

[Helene K. S. Jensen]

I really like this. Even though it's a short poem that just pust emphasis on each phrase and gives them more meaning that way.

[Jo Todd]

Thankyou, I glad you like it. I wanted to keep it short and simple. Sometimes it is better to say a thousand things with one word than to say one thing with a thousand words.

[Helene K. S. Jensen]

You are so right.

[De 'Anthony Subban II]

i like your poem

[Jo Todd]

Thankyou

[KristynRuth]

Whoa! Loved this one too!

[Jo Todd]

Woo thankyou, I have more to come

[zainul]

A special piece with profound meaning.

[Jo Todd]

Thankyou, I would be interested to know what meaning you found in this as i feel it may be interpreted in may ways.

[zainul]

You are very correct to say that it may be interpreted in many ways.
I think it is rather better for you let a reader assume her;his own meaning.
I don't like to share it at this moment.
You may check if 'my' between voice and only in the third line should be 'may'.
You may fix it as well.
Thank you for sharing a nice piece,dear poet :)

[Luke Rawlings]

I did not know what this was about until you told me, I was honestly lost. I like the fact even in a short poem your structure gives each phase of the poem the attention it deserves. I personally would have added more adjectives, but that is me being picky. Well done! A suitably short and sweet piece :D

[Jo Todd]

Why thankyou, out of curiosity where would you have added the adjectives?

[Luke Rawlings]

In my 'hungry' ear, your 'alluring' voice, my 'lost' mind. I might have added a simile in the middle line, something like 'shattered like glass' but less cheesy haha.

[Jo Todd]

I think I like it as it is, feels clean and uncluttered