Doctors orders.

Doctor wait!

it's not too late

please don't operate

I promise you this time

I promise everything will be fine

inside my mind

nothing will intertwine

from whats wrong to whats fine

I'm a different man 

this time I have a plan

I'm gonna face conquer my problems. face my fears

even if it brings me to my knees and my face full of tears 

I have goals, I can see them from a far

before I was blind, my thought process was dark

doctor can't you see, I am a new man!

find it in your heart for this is what you must understand

don't take away my mind, I swear I'm fine this time!

don't prescribe me those pills that take away my creative and imaginative thrills

I'm gonna prove you wrong

I'm gonna be somebody!

I'm stable , I will be able

to become who I want to be

doctor please, don't do this to me

I was trapped in my mind but now I'm free

and soon enough you'll truly see who I was sent to be, me. 

Reviews

[spitballing]

Some very good rhymes here and there. Over all it's pretty well written and a bit on the striking side.