Next Stop, Hell

I was a good man, but the evil grew within and I fell

into the fiery pits of Satans home, hell

I look around, everything is surrounded by flames

theres evil everywhere, this is something I can not tame

As I walk through Hell, I begin to regret my life decisions

i wish I would have made being a good person my life's mission 

Hell is a place where you do not wish to be 

i just wanna pack my bags, tie my shoes, and flee

as I try to escape, I realized I deserve this, this was my fate

I tried to become a good person but it was much too late

The deeper I walk into hell, the more I become frightened 

i wish I didn't hurt so many people, I should have chose to enlighten

But I broke people's heart, I caused nothing but pain

I could've been a great man but I stuck in evil's lane 

I walk through the fiery pits of hell and begin to think

Why did i become this person, I can't believe how low I have sinked

My horns begin to grow, my demon wings begin to grow

Satan flies down and says "Welcome to hell, lets start the show" 

He grabs my hand, and gives me a tour

I begin to worry, because I have no idea whats in store

He shows me people burning, people drowning in pain

I began to cry as the blood begins to rain

Satan whispers in my ear " Are you ready to live in fear?" 

Once I heard him say that, I began to drown in my own tears

He chained me up, and struck me with his sphere

And the more pain I went through, the more he cheered

This is how its gonna be from now on, and I can't make it stop

Evil was my favorite store in my life, thats where I loved to shop

This is it, Satan has me under his wing

I just got married to him, and I'm wearing his fire like a ring

Reviews

[Carla Hurd]

I really liked this!! The only thing I would say is watch your "beats". It seemed like you tried to make this flow with a rhythm but you lost the "beat" in places...but other than its really great!