One hour from now

"Love knows not what time is." and there is never enough time..

One hour from now

I´ll be in the sky

Thinking about you

 

One hour from now

You´d be on the ground

Not knowing what to do

 

One hour from now

I´ll be staring at the plane wing

Quietly crying

 

One hour from now

You´ll wish you could forget me

But not manage to when you’re trying

 

One hour from now

Time will stand still in our lives

Live, breathe, we can´t hide

 

One hour from now

I´d be out of the world we shared

On the other side

 

One hour from now

All hope will be lost

One hour from now

Love will be a lost cause

 

One hour from now

I will all seem confusing, wrong

The tear stream won´t end

One hour from now

I´ll send you this poem

Reviews

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I really liked the feel of this. Starting each stanza with "one hour from now" really made me feel as if time were slinking by. There was a sense of urgency here that was wonderful and kept pulling me through the poem.

[Johanna]

Thankyou :) I´m glad you enjoyed it! :)

[Rebekah W.]

I was a foreign exchange student a few years back, and this poem made me think of the relationship I left when I came back home. It was actually heart-warming to see words that I could apply to my memories. Thank you for that.

[Johanna]

Your welcome, and thankyou for liking it :) I´m glad you could relate :)

[Criss ;)]

One hour from now All hope will be lost
One hour from now Love will be a lost cause
/....again a deep poem but i liked + loved = enjoyed this one much............you got me "pretty", i really love this poem. All stanzas're very nicely expressed in your way. what you have,what you got you just dropped that all.......lovely write, this time i wanna give you from my heart.......101 / 100 :)

take care........!!

[Johanna]

Thankyou so much!! :) You are so nice! I´m glad you liked it, appreciate the feedback :))
again, thankyou! have a great day :)

[Angi]

Oh, this is so sad! I loved the last line. Even though you will be apart, there is still a fragile thread binding you. Lovely. Angi~

[Johanna]

Thankyou Angi, yeah.. the last line is the little flicker of hope in a sad situation. There always has to be hope

[Angi]

My pleasure, Johanna.

[PurpleQuartz]

This is such a sad poem that you wrote beautifully.

[Johanna]

thankyou! :)

[Jack...]

As much as I hate to admit it, this poem almost made me cry...I managed to hold it back for I am at work and didn't want anyone to see me. However, the sadness of leaving someone like this touched me deeply as i have experienced this before. Very nice.

[Johanna]

Thankyou so much Jack! I´m glad you liked it and that the poem was relateable to you. Thankyou for reading my work! :)