You'll fall

It´s not like we didn´t matter

It´s not like I didn´t care

It´s not like you and me were

Going anywhere

It´s not like I didn´t love you

It´s not like we changed

But then again, you and I

Never really made much sense

 

If you run any faster now

You´ll fall, you´ll fall

If you trample on my heart

It won´t hurt at all

Cause we are already so far apart

I guess our love has been misled

You shouldn´t run any faster now

You didn´t leave us any time before you fled

Shadow in the streetlight

All of these problems, they´re all in your head

Right?

 

It´s not like I´ll come after you

It´s not like that means it wasn´t real

It´s not like there´s any use to argue

You are to far away to see how I feel

It´s not like I won´t miss you

It´s not like it will matter what I think

Loves kiss, we went amiss

You have already decided what this is

You shouldn´t run any faster

You´ll fall, you´ll fall

Crack of dawn

Look behind you

The road you walked on is gone

It´s not like we didn´t matter

It´s not like I didn´t care

It´s not like you and me were

Going anywhere

Reviews

[Horizons]

Well structured poem with some powerful words. I liked the concept of the poem. Sounds good in the write in your poetric ways of words. I enjoyed the poem.

[Johanna]

Thankyou so much! :)

[Inspiring Writer]

Nice, sensible, great, awesome, powerful and beautiful if i use such kinda words to you and to yur this write, it won't be good enough though because your this write worth some more than my words.
I don't know what others think about your this piece or what others spell of it... but i know what i got from here, i got something new today by your this piece... and your few line's're so powerful make me crazy to read your some more... or all stuffs today. lol (but i don;t think i've enough time... lol Haha)

i liked few lines like
If you run any faster now
You´ll fall, you´ll fall
If you trample on my heart
It won´t hurt at all,.... such a great lines and l liked few more too, have a look
It´s not like we didn´t matter
It´s not like I didn´t care
It´s not like you and me were
Going anywhere...

I think your whole poem's based on your last stanza's beautiful lines. Very bright view of write you showed me today... by this piece. I'd looking forward reading your some more stuffs.

[Johanna]

Wow, I´m flattered, thankyou so much!! :)))
It made me really happy that you read and liked this poem, and that you want to read more of my work :) I hope you have a realy good day!! thanks again :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

the story of a romance that just didn't work out. Some of that really hit home because sometimes i feel exactly like this with my boyfriend sometimes. That its not going anywhere. Sad but true although i never give up trying to work on our problems cant give up on us that easy ha ha. Back to your poem i related to it quite allot, it was full of romance like i said and emotion a sad little poem but very interesting read. i quite enjoyed it

[Johanna]

Thankyou :))

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome :)

[Steve]

This sounds like song lyrics. :0)

[Johanna]

It acually has a melody :) But it works as a poem as well since it´s not that organized..

[Tate Morgan]

Sometimes theres no going back home again.

[ScottWinchester]

... lovely, Jo :) One of my favorites that you've done. Exquisite use of language... I'll shelve this in my library :)

You should be proud of this one.

[Johanna]

thankyou! :)))

[Dr. Wood ?]

A song in the making....I'm guessing you aren't an oldie like me, but this was pretty good..it has realism about it....You might want to take the T off Fart to make it read FAR though...2nd verse...5th line

[Johanna]

I´m glad you like it :) oh wow xD haha, thankyou for letting me know! you know how you read it so many times you just don´t see it? :P Do you think I should keep writing on it or can it be accapted as done? :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

I think it's ok as it is..You can spend hours editing and still come back to the original...Nothing screams out to be omitted and nothing seems to be missing