At least for September

Fall came and along with the leaves this poem dropped into my head.. <3

Leaves of fall

Fall through the sky

Land by my feet

 

You and I

Are saying goodbye

By a maple tree

 

The sun lost it´s glow

Leaving orange, red, yellow

Rays for us to touch

You turned to go

But I grabbed your hand

It hurt too much

 

Stay

At least for September

Stay

At least until the trees are bare

Stay

So I can remember

When winter is here

When the sky looses it´s gold

When the night unfolds

What it felt like

To be loved

Reviews

[Saruwa]

I love this! Thanks for sharing

[Neon]

Ha! Very lovely poem... I loved this piece, Johanna!
Your so cool, pretty!

[Antonio Valentino]

loved the ending..

i think fall is poety's favorite month

well done

:)

[Johanna]

I think so too.. at least there is something really special over it..
and I´m often drawn to that month when I write

thankyou :)

[Antonio Valentino]

perhaps it signals the end of the beginning.. only to start anew once more

you're very welcome :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

There's something special about September...I love how you embraced it here, how you begged for love "to stay"....

So nice to meet you, Johanna!

[Johanna]

Thankyou :)

Yes it is.. there is something magic about that month..
Nice to meet you too Kelly :)

[Distantview123]

An emotional write, full of expression. Thanks for sharing.

[Johanna]

Thankyou :)

[zainul]

I am very impressed by the lovely expression throughout the poem.

[Johanna]

Thankyou :) :)

[zainul]

You are most welcome.:):)

[Sami Khalil]

I think you have a typo : laves should be leaves...
A splendid read and write...:)

[Johanna]

Thankyou for mentioning it me :) thankyou :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)