I don´t know what it is

 

 

It´s okay

Don´t look at me that way

I know what your gonna say

I understand

 

Do you think I haven´t felt I too?

Our love a hole we´re falling through

You don´t hold me the way you used to

 

I wonder

If you ever knew me at all

If it was all we thought it were

I take our picture of the wall

Your words replaying in my ear

 

So this is were it ends

Come tears, your face blurs

From lovers to strangers

I´m okay, how come my heart hurts?

 

It´s okay

When it started we both knew it would end

Admit it

But I was hoping you were different

All the lovely little things

I´m so tired of failing

Cupid forgot how to use his wings

 

Goodbye Love

If that´s what it was

It was what it felt like when you held me

If I think to much

It doesn’t get me a cause

What is love? What is love´s bliss?

Don´t ask me, I´ve never felt it

I don´t know what it is

 

 

 

Reviews

[Neon]

OH NO! AGAIN!

I hate those folks who break your beautiful heart. Love does mean to be with someone with peace and that's it. Love is an ingredient that mixtures diff.diff. colors of love as same as a Rainbow and pours the beauty of kindness and love into the heart of someone to let the someone know how a love change the life if we treat the love right and never make love only to make nights but life for life :)

Don't be sad, you beautiful girl, you don't look good when you are sad, you know what when you are sad the sun never comes up and the moon never goes down, the life never runs and the time never passes because time moves only when you do smile, life run only when you do laugh, sun comes up only when you blush and the moon goes down only and only when you do fly up in the sky with your freedom without any kinda hurt at all :)

So, keep smiling!
By the way, your smile sometimes makes the heart-beat fast of those people who are just living the life only to see your smile, to make a smile on your face because if you smile flowers are alive and when you do cry, the birds forget how to fly.
Now c'mmon, Keep smiling!

[David Scott]

The questions and the denials...
Maybe we shall share our broken hearts some day.
I'm further along this trail of tears than your current poems reveal.
Just know you poetry will help you heal and others will be led to the waters of your cleansing tears.
Write! Write! And the write!
Good work. I felt it in my heart.