Somewhere

I think I´m gonna leave

I think I´m gonna go

I don´t want to be here anymore

Oh

I think I´ll disappear

Out in the world somewhere

Somewhere pretty, somewhere safe

I´ll disappear without a trace

Somewhere were I can be myself

Somewhere for me, nobody else

Somewhere close to the shore

Were I can watch the sea roar

Somewhere no one can hurt me anymore

 

I think I´m gonna leave

I think I´ll just go

Don´t bother looking for me

I´ll be gone tomorrow

Oh

Don´t ask, I think you know why

I wont bother with goodbye…

I hate goodbyes

I´ll just go somewhere where the sea isn´t tame

Somewhere no one knows my name

Somewhere good, somewhere nice

Somewhere to be me without disguise

Somewhere with a bluepainted door

Somewhere when stars fall to the floor

Somewhere no one can hurt me anymore

Reviews

[Yours Truly]

love this! how i feel at times too.

[Johanna]

thanks :) .. yeah, me too..

[Micheal Abraham]

love the theme the last lines really drew me in finding that perfect place to just be yourself. great piece :)

[Johanna]

sorry for late answer, but thankyou :)

[Neon]

Very nice theme, i liked the piece... but hey .. as am your frnd so, i want to help you to raise your skills
.. i meant ..

"I´m think I´m gonna leave" in yer this line .. you should replace it with "I think, I`m gonna leave"
because "I`m think" is grammatically wrong because when you use "I`m" than use "Ing" ... i meant .. write it as "I`m thinking not as I`m think" or replace the line with this "I think, I`m gonna leave"

Hope i~m able to help you :)

By the way .. very nice poem .. I want to see it into my library and i'll keep it into my library too :)
thanks for writing a coolio piece :) keep writing.

[Johanna]

Thankyou :) It´s just a writing mistake, it´s supposed to be I, haven´t seen it, thankyou for your imput, it´s helpful :)

[Neon]

Your welcome... Oh I C .. yeh ..I was thinking that you've skipped of your mind :) anyway, not a big deal dear frnd... I know your a best writer :)

[Sami Khalil]

I feel that way so many times...A splendid read and write...:).......................

[Johanna]

thankyou :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................

[Calissa Knox]

My favorite line is, "Somewhere close to the shore
Were I can watch the sea roar"

Every line flows together perfectly with the next.
I can definitely see this poem being put to music.

This is so beautifully expressed.
I can honestly relate to the emotions in this poem.

Wonderful job!

[Johanna]

thankyou so much!!

[Calissa Knox]

You're very welcome!

[00000000000000000000000..]

I like this and reason being I have felt that way, I wanted to go to some far away island no1 has ever seen. But I found out I can walk out in this big world and see my own image painted up so no1 else really matters when I am that way cause I walking threw a storm or yet some perfect day with a smile seeing all before my eyes. I stop trying to figure it all out just went with a new flow:)

[Johanna]

I´m glad it ended well and that you went with a new flow :))hope all is well, glad you liked them poem! - Johanna

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Smiles me too:) It is:) I did:)