When December came

Every second feels like a minute

Every minute like a day

I´ve been counting them

Ever since you went away

 

It´s been thirty eight days

Seven hours, ten minutes

Since you said goodbye

I been writing letters that I

haven´t sent

Thinking thoughts that I haven´t meant

Counting every heartbeat

Every star in the sky

Because I 

Thought that when December came

Everything would be okay again

I thought that when December came

My worries would melt with the snow

I thought that when December came

I would be able to let you go

 

Every hour feels like a month

Every month like a year

I´ve been counting hours

Ever since you left me here

 

I´ve been picking up the phone

Only to hang up

Pretending that I´m fine alone

That if I only held on long enough

For the cold wind to blow

For each lantern to glow

For the freezing birds to fly

Cause I 

Thought that when December came

Everything would be okay again

I thought that when December came

My worries would melt with the snow

I thought that when December came

I would be able to let you go

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[kumars]

nice poem in indeed simple and sober and full expression of gesture.

[MsJewel]

I could feel the longing in your beautiful words. A stunning poem.

:) Julie

[Neon]

Hey, Johanna-pretty!

This write's really very touchable, very emotional, very smooth-delight, soft as same as a wind, cold as same a snow, thin as same as a rain and beautiful as same as just like you. I enjoyed even I felt every words, every moment of the poem and I liked it that you've a talent of writing. This's called "Truly penned" stuff, your called "A True-Writer" who doesn't write by the hand, who doesn't even write think from the mind but always write what a heart of yours feel to write beautifully.

Even though, you didn't just write a poem but you poured the scent of your kind and a pure soul into the words, the scent of your beauty you penned into the theme, the words came from your heart and of course the whole poem's well written into the words of yours with an every-beat of your beautiful, scented, kind, soft, smooth heart.

Wonderful, beautiful, amazing as well as an outstanding poem!

[Jack...]

This is so very cool. I love the entire feeling of this piece even though sadness seems to decorate each line. The tag, "I thought that when December came" is so song like, a very melodic flow to this. You have expressed your feelings very nicely. Well done.

[Johanna]

thankyou Jack :)) I´m thankful you took time to read it :) Yeah.. I acually tried to sing it.. but I´m sure about the melody yet.. I can sing, but sadly can´t play any instrument, which could be really useful at times like theese ;) ^^)

[Sami Khalil]

"Thought that when December came

Everything would be okay again

I thought that when December came

My worries would melt with the snow"

A splendid write on December...Bravo

[Johanna]

Thankyou :) Thanks for always reading and reviewing, your really kind!

[Sami Khalil]

MY pleasure...:)..................