I wanted to talk

I wanted to talk about this
That is why I came here today
but standing here I just feel foolish
There is nothing more I could say

You looked like you saw a ghost
When you opened the door
and standing here what hurts the most
Is that you can´t even look at me anymore

All that I could manage was I´m sorry
I´m sorry that I even came
You wanted to be loved but you wont let me
and then silence was all that remained

I left your door
For the very last time
Hurried down to the first floor
Before you could see me cry

Not all things that break
Can be put back together again
and it was a mistake
to think that you would want our love to mend

 Maybe you want to be loved
Just not by me, not anymore
You didn´t watch me go
I knew before I turned around
You just slammed the door

I wanted to talk about this
That is why I came here today
but now I just feel foolish
There is nothing more I could say


30. December 2013

Reviews

[Elina]

This is beautiful. I could feel the tragedy, the anguish deep within my very bones. Wonderfully penned. I really enjoyed reading this.

[Johanna]

Thankyou Elina :)) your so nice :)

[zainul]

The splendid write captivated me and made me wonder how you crafted such a nice work.
Congratulations,dear poet!!!

[Johanna]

Thankyou Zainul, sorry for late answer! :)

[zainul]

No problem,dear friend.:)

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Johanna this was awesome it felt like a HallMark moment I love the picture very much , It painted the image very well. I see a typeo but its no biggie:) Your looked like you saw a ghost, Should be You, I think you got so caught up in the write you over looked, I do that and Sami and others have to remind me lol:) Hypertension was my issue it clouded my mind but I am good to go now:) You did an awesome job I enjoy your writes so much :) Happy New Years:) and God bless:)

[Johanna]

Thankyou so much :)) yes.. got kind of caught up in the flow, thankyou for telling me :) I think I fixed it.. I´ll refresh the page and see later :) I´m so happy you liked it :) I try to make the pictures add to the poem.. Your review made me really happy :) Happy new year Jonathan! :) God bless you too!

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Your welcome double smile calls for some Elvis lol! Well it did sound like some tears could flow in the mist of the write, HallMark moment:) I sure did Joanna:) Well im glad tis the season:) Thank you so much, Your awesome:) Bless be:)

[Sami Khalil]

I felt I was watching a movie where the two face each other after a long separation ...I like this alot...Bravo........

[Johanna]

Thankyou Sami :))) I´m glad :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........................

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Johanna... you have painted emotions
in a real way that stirs my soul like the
Ocean waves. Great poetry... truly... Pat