Wind

So it´s been crazy storms in Norway theese past few days.. with everlasting wind, rain and thunder. I wrote this poem down inspired by the weather.

WIND

The wind is blowing outside

It never stops

Not since silence died

Disappeared underneath the raindrops

I remember the days

When there was peace

But listening to this bitter breeze

It´s just a fading memory

The wind is blowing outside

Just out of reach

If I could only touch the sky

Drag this unsettled air away from me

I remember the days

Before the blustery deep

It varies how sane a person stays

Without sleep

The wind is blowing outside

Rattling the walls

It´s just a matter of time

Before they all fall

I remember the days

When I could close my eyes

Just feel warmth on my face

Without the hollow screams from the sky

The wind is blowing outside

It never stops

Not since silence died

I'm disappearing underneath the raindrops

Reviews

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I love it ,btw great minds think a lot I did a poem on wind too lol :) That's wild my friend:)

[Johanna]

thanks Jonathan :D

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Your very welcome Johanna:)

[cycy]

this is a lovely poem indeed, i love how you described the weather and how you feel about it, well written Johanna

[Johanna]

Thankyou :)

[MAC]

what an excellent poem about the personal side and effects of a storm. terrific write!

[Johanna]

thankyou Mark :)) glad you liked it :)

[MAC]

you are welcome and I did :)

[Sami Khalil]

Very beautiful in its descriptiveness...Pen on till the next storm of life...:)...............

[Johanna]

"Pen on till the next storm of life" that should be a quote :)
Thankyou sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...Any time...:)......................

[Sami Khalil]

I added it to my inspiration time collection. Every time I come up with a saying of sorts I added there. Thank you for pointing that out...:).................

[Johanna]

no problem :) how fun :)

[Sami Khalil]

Have fun too...:).........................

[Lilly]

Nice poem :) I like the repetition used especially in the last stanza

[Johanna]

Thankyou :) I´m glad :)

[Rossen]

What a lovely poem,"underneath the raindrops" fresh and flowing~

[Johanna]

Thankyou :D Hurray! :) thankyou for reading and reviewing:)

[Rossen]

likewise...