It will rain

It rains a lot in Bergen..the rain is very inspirational to me.. this poem came to me

When I heard your voice outside

I fought against the pain

Tonight when I close my eyes

I just know

It will rain

Did I confuse you?

By making a scene

When I watched you walk away

and called you things I didn´t mean

I admit it was a surprise

That you weren't sure

Still here you are once more

Outside my front door

When I heard your voice outside

I heard nothing new

Saying my name tearyeyed

The neighbors felt sorry for you

I´m not an angel

I don´t have a heart of gold

I have a heart that feels love

But the spark is getting cold

You wanted me to let you in

It´s always the same

Tonight when I close my eyes

I just know

It will rain

Reviews

[Neon]

Rain's been my inspiration as well cause I love the rain the way I love thunder storms. lol
This poem makes me fee good and refresh. All the combinations of things you penned's marvelous and outstanding as before. Your passion about writing's all what that keeps you gorgeous ..O' I meant, that keeps your skilled. I always love reading your stuffs because your stuffs're really much different than other writers indeed and which's why I love your work.

Hey pretty, you gotta believe me that your new stuffs're really much impressive and enjoyable reading with your great rhyme. So, I can say now, I've utilized my much time with your beautiful stuffs.

100/100! :)

Stay always beautiful as same as you are!
Your a best writer ever so, your my fav. writer ever, Miss Norway!

It's been my honor to read your beautiful fragrant stuffs which're well written with your intoxicated scent that makes me feel refresh with your words indeed.

Keep up the great work, pretty!

[Tate Morgan]

Johanna this is great Well done formed immaculate . i felt it and that is what poetry does

[Johanna]

Thankyou Tate :) yes, it´s one of the most inportant things

[Tate Morgan]

you are welcome

[Devesh]

Is your throat alright now? I want to listen to the song! *-* Awesome, as always! You reminded me of Bruno Mars with this one :)

[Johanna]

Yeah, I´ll try to get i recorded and put it up :) Though I just made up the melodies on the spot :)

[Devesh]

Looking forward to it :)

[Alexis]

wow! you just literally AWED me

[Johanna]

that made me smile :) thankyou A.J :)

[Alexis]

:) you deserved it! Good poem = good comments

[Demii]

awe, this is so passionate and romantic, and I like the rhythm and flow that it has :)

[Johanna]

Thankyou demii :))

[Demii]

Anyday girl :)