Doomed

I just pressed "Add writing" and wrote this.. what do you think?

Was this what you wanted from the beginning?
Were we doomed? Were we doomed?
You blocked my voice out when I was singing
It ended to soon, did it end to soon?

Because I don´t know
What this feeling is
What is it I miss?
Is it you?
Or is it that hope
That wonderful dream
I was after
The dream I thought that you were

Was this what you wanted from the beginning?
The beginning of the end? The beginning of the end
You blocked out my voice when I was singing
I write a lot of songs, I don´t think you´ll ever read them

Reviews

[Kenneth Nicholas Lowe]

This put a smile on my face, thank you for that...

[Johanna]

welcome :) happy to hear it

[Blogger]

You sound like a romantic. That is sweet.

[Johanna]

Yes I am.. very much so..:) I have never been in a relationship, but I try to put myself in others shoes and write a lot that way :)

[Wórdsmíth]

But, Johanna.. i`ve read your this song. So, yeah now you can say, you write allot of songs and you smile when i`ll read them all" (Smile) Nice poem, the construction of words worked here like the beam of transparent lights coming through the grey sky. I enjoyed reading the words. Well pen`d!!

[Johanna]

haha I smiled :) thankyou wordssmith, do you have a name I can call you by? It dosen´t have to be the real one :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Welcome ;) Oh yea.. sure, you can go with "'Smith" ;) I`d love to hear this name from your sweet mouth. And hey, thanks for smiling .. xoxo ;)