Never say hi

Two in one day.. I know.. but I´ve made a really great friend who inspired me<3

Never say hi

Never say hallo

Don´t you remember

Don´t you know

That we threw stones

and built a wall

So thick I can't hear you anymore

Never say hi

Never say hallo

Watch how much despair can grow

It´s covering the wall that we made

I never forgave

That I must confess

But now our world is soundless

Never say hi

Never say hallo

I won't say it back

I heard my heart break

After you said goodbye

and I heard nothing after that

Reviews

[Kenneth Nicholas Lowe]

Damn... This is good... This is so good... I can't even tell you how good this is.... Tres Beaux

[Johanna]

best review I´ve gotten haha :D thankyou :))

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

A powerful piece about heartache and trusting of others. This one delivers like a punch to the stomach, a slap across the face!

[Johanna]

Thankyou so much! :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A raw emotion in the piece lets the reader wonder and embrace the wording, well done.

[Johanna]

thankyou Thomas :)

[An owl on the moon]

Such painful rhythm and rhyme... the letting go... moving further down life's path alone... Felt the sadness of it overwhelm me...

[Johanna]

Thankyou Craig, I´m glad the poem reaches people

[Wórdsmíth]

Aww... it`s very sad. I know that feeling when someone says, "Goodbyes" .. eh.. worst moments of life. Your poem`s beautiful & written with the depth of your heart. Keep it up my friend! ;)

[Opeyemi Jide-Ojo]

Lots of emotion penned here... there's some good imagery (i can readily picture a wall- and also you and the other on opposite sides of the wall silently wishing the other will say hello)... good work J

[Johanna]

Thankyou so much :) -J

[Mayank]

Its sadly beautiful, short but expressive and to the point.

[Johanna]

thankyou :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

I know excectly what you are going through and I can tell you from experience it is better to talk to the person than ignoring. So go and talk it out!
:)
CDB

[Johanna]

Thankyou for the review :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

My pleasure :)

[Avinash]

Emotional defenses in full force when someone who has hurt in past tries to make you trust him again. Not gonna happen with someone as strong and beautiful like you and who knows how to respect her feelings.
Enjoyed this write of defiance.

[Johanna]

Thankyou for your kind words :)

[A. Amos]

Its great to find one person who insipres you to write...lucky you! Enjoyed the read.

[Johanna]

It really is :) Thankyou Amos :) Have a good day today :)