I´ve Waited

New poem, as I promised a friend of mine. Not sure how I feel about this one.. will leave it up to you guys :)

You don't know how long I´ve waited

I've been counting, day after day

Remembering the things you said

Repeating each number in my head

You don't know how deep the mind dwells

Here the clock goes slower than anywhere else

I dread the night that always lasts

Each sunrise means another day has passed

You don't know how long I´ve waited

I've been counting, day after day

Hoping to reach my goal

It hasn't come, the longing is changing my soul

Will you come?

When I´m gray and old?

Will you ever come?

I hope it´s love I'm waiting for

Will you come?

One...two...three...four

Reviews

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Ah, the promises, the days counting down, the seconds passing by quickly. I like the concept you have here. And I like it that it remains a little mysterious.

[Johanna]

thankyou :) yup, mystery is always good hehe :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Some bushes of pain has struck on your heart & that heart got burst out into an ink of your own wisdom; insights; aches; memories & love. Nice poem.

[Johanna]

thankyou :)