Don´t you

Made on my way home tonight

Don´t you stay

Don´t you go

You ask me what I want

I don´t know

don´t you love

Don´t you hate

and don´t you want me

until it´s too late

Don´t you wait

don´t you make

Me think this is great

Don´t you deliver it straight

Don´t you be distant

don´t you kiss

Don´t you listen to

Any of this

Don´t you be mad

Don´t tell me I´m frail

Don´t you be sad

Like you know we´ll fail

Don´t you run...please don´t run

I´d stop loving you if I could

Don´t you run...I don´t want you to run

but maybe you should

Reviews

[Echoes of Eros]

The rhythm you create pulls the heart and soul into your contrasts, your painful struggle to hold on when wondering if you should just let go. Everything flowed in bittersweet perfection. xo

[Johanna]

wow, thankyou! means a lot. xo

[Echoes of Eros]

Look forward to more of your poetry! xo

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it s sound like good song. i like open ending. it s sound very fresh . i like it.

[Johanna]

yeah I usually sing the poems while I write them down :) thankyou :)

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that s great method .

[Kaylee Nicole]

Wow. I really liked this! I feel like I can connect with this really well. Thanks for sharing!

[Johanna]

hurray, thankyou :))

[Pushkar Prabhat]

interesting write!
plays out well!
well written.
i liked it!!
:)

[Johanna]

thankyou :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome!! :)