Heartbeat

I wrote this last night before falling asleep.. hope you like it :)

Why is your heart so restless?
It beats hard beneath my fingers
Is this for the best?
In the air your question lingers
I should say yes
But I do not know
The words won´t leave my lips
While your heart keeps beating on
Underneath my fingertips

You look me in the eyes
and say you wish
It didn´t have to be like this
I reply with a kiss
We never were good at goodbyes
We move apart with care
I can hear your heart from over here
We are no good
Not together or apart
Hopelessness in the air
of love so misunderstood
The beating of your heart
Echoes were you stood

Reviews

[Saddam]

It is very nice one, actually too good.... It is rounding in my heart.

We move apart with care
I can hear your heart from over here

[Johanna]

so kind of you.. Glad you liked it :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is quite a brilliant deep piece hun.
To hard to be with them, to hard to be without them.
Allot of hurt in this piece, allot of heartache and sorrow.
I like the end part, you ended it well.
Heartbreaking emotional piece, but I quite enjoyed it anyway :)
Keep writing :)

[Johanna]

I´m glad :) yes I tend to write sad .. sorry about that
glad you liked it :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

haha that's fine :)
I did.
your more then welcome :)