Emptiness

Tried to put myself in someone else´s shoes.

I´m gonna sit here alone

and think about you

Until the clouds cover the sun

You turned by heart into stone

So all my feelings fell through

I lost every single one

Left with this emptiness, emptiness

Falling through the air never reaching the ground

Left with this hollowness, hollowness

Forgot to wake up again after I drowned

I´m gonna sit here alone

Watch the sky change

Until I've seen all formations it can make

You turned my heart into stone

and now it feels so strange

To be sleeping while I'm really awake

Left with this emptiness, emptiness

Falling through the air never reaching the ground

Left with this hollowness, hollowness

Forgot to go to heaven after I drowned

Reviews

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

I love it so much. It sound so good. Thanks for sharing this great poem. Keep up on writing like this.

[Johanna]

thank you :)

[Indra Neil]

Intense imagery in this beautifully sad write! Nice usage of refrains!

[Dr. Sojan Antony Veetti..]

Emptiness is really meaningful...