Wait On Her Fool

Poem

The Way I Care
The Way I Share
Birds R Jus Flares
Love Is Never A Night Mare
Jus Keep It In Ur Prayers
Only U & Gods Know The Truths
Let Her Be Sin
She The Devils Works
& The Way This Works
Is Manipulating Ur Ideas For Love
Love Me Not
I Hate Dat I Love U Dearly
I Speak My Thoughts Freely
Tours U
But I Cant Help But To Wait On U
But This Love Is Loosing Faith
Affection
Only IF
But What IF Is The Question
Many Mans Don't Take Dat Sort OF Action
I Guess I Jus Wait On It Like A Fool I Guess ,-/ Grrr

Reviews

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Reflections on Love and the person that is loved. When you use text language~A reader may not follow your writing as well as you intended.

[OnePiece]

Thanks I Will Work on It

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome! I look forward to a revision...

[Lydia Shutter]

Certainly good rhyming, but it was difficult to follow the meaning. Sounds like unrequited love though. Lydi**

[OnePiece]

Thanks & i Will Reflect on it ,-)