The Lagoon of the Sky

This silent tear,

Soaring,

Flying,

Sinking

Falling,

Landed here.

Like a lake among an ocean,

The salted sea among the lagoon of the sky.

The endless blue,

That I look to,

To cry.

Author's Note

More of a rant than actual writing. Critique if you'd like.

Reviews

[DearSweetAgony]

Theres nothing to critique about.
You did a very good job,
even if you were ranting.
:)

[Eileen]

Oh you. It' really simple and makes my heart ache. I absolutley love your writing in every possible way.