Fish

I sit here with my dad,

Our poles in the water,

The worms in the bucket,

and my bobber above water.

 

I yawn,

For i have been there forever,

No action,

Boring.

 

My bobber is pulled under,

as i jump to my feet,

Dad! Dad!,

I scream, excitedly.

 

I stand there,

Dumbfounded,

as my dad says to me,

Jordan! REAL IT IN!

Reviews

[Kady Kat]

i like it! i think you should use cuplets(2 lines per pome) and put them togerther