Perfect

Different people have different meanings of perfect.

One can be great at everything.

Another could be just right.

Mine is Flawless,

unforgetable,

Breathtaking,

astonnishing,

beautiful.

You to me are perfect.

Im every way,

shape,

and form.

You may disagree,

but you are truly perfect,

to me.

Reviews

[Abigail Lee]

The first three lines of this poem are a bit awkward, though they do fit the poem as a whole, they seem to stick out a bit more than the rest. I really like how you got your point across, but I didn't like all the words in a row like that, I think grouping them a bit would make it flow a bit smoother. I also really liked the little ending rhyme, it was sweet. Nicely done. ^^

[Closed Account]

wow. I love this one. Mine is like a little bitty speck of dust compared to this. I love it. :)
--Bells

[Marina]

This is so true.

The person you love will always be perfect to you, and this shows that really well!

xxStaySweet,
Rina