Simple and Sweet

The night is young,

and the crisp air calls our names.

We both go and sit on a blanet,

on a sandy beach.

The sun is setting,

you sigh any lay your head on my shoulder.

I smile,

you smile.

You drift off to sleep,

and i watch you,

thinking of how beautiful and peaceful you are.

I drift off to sleep.

When i dream,

It is always about being with you.

Am i in your dreams too?

When you wake up,

you watch me.

Smiling.

When i wake up,

i get greeted with a kiss,

simple,

and sweet.

The sun has setted,

and i am sitting here with the perfect girl,

how much better can life be?

Reviews

[Stephanie]

Just as the title suggests, it was simple and beyond sweet! Whoever the girl is, she's lucky.

"When i dream,
It is always about being with you.
Am i in your dreams too?"

That was sooo adorable! I loved this :]

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Oh wow ... another great one.. reading your work is like stepping back in time for me.. so fresh and youthful.. I still have that girl inside me.. your feelings run so deep in this writing for someone.. love the feeling of it! =)