Without you.

Without you,

my world is lost.

Im all alone,

ITs cold.

When i talk to you,

You are the light,

my savior,

To come and find me,

once again.

Reviews

[[Converse and Aviators]..]

hey jordan!! THis is really good, short and powerful. nice job ;)

[Closed Account]

this is absolutly amazing, jordan. it has a lot of emotion, like nic was probably trying to say in her review. Great job!
--Bells =D

[Nicole]

Very good, very well written. I can feel the emptyness in you.

Good job! :~)
-- Nicole