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Something i wrote a long time ago

What was once happiness,

is now sadness,

when one can no longer go to bed,

because of a clouded head filled with dread,

when a longingness for life,

is no longer rife,

when one looses sight of the light,

have no fright.

I'll be there to make it bright,

I'll be the one to make things all right.

Author's Note

this waas written a long, long, long time ago.

Reviews

[SheActsLikeSummer]

This was really good. I really enjoyed it. But I must admit, the rhyming there at the end came on a bit too strong. Like, there were five rhyming words almost in a row, kind of disturbs the flow of the otherwise gently flowing poem. Anyway, great job. :)

[Sarah Redigan]

nice, i like it a lot .. always good to think there is someone to help you in the darkest of times