Unfrozen

I once believed in Love;
Believed I could never be alone.
I thought he was mine forever,
Now I sit here on my own.

I was frozen,
Like the first day of winter.
Because of Love
I had become bitter.

I once believed the words he spoke,
But his voice is but a whisper in the breeze.
I wanted so bad for this to be true
Now I've fallen on my knees.

I was frozen,
Like the first day of winter.
My heart's been ripped apart
Left in tiny splinters.

I once believed I'd always be lonely,
Then you walked in my door.
I knew then that I
Would be lonely no more.

Now I'm unfrozen,
Like the first day of spring.
You take my hand in yours
And adorn it with a ring.

Unfrozen
Through the seasons throughout the year.
I know you'll always be with me
To love me and hold me near.

Copyright©JosieWentzel05April2007

 

 

Reviews

[a Messenger]

Very nice, much more upbeat than your usual work.
As usual great rhyme and rhythm. A nice smooth flow.
Taking us from one extreme of love, heartbreak,
to the other, happiness. Beautifully done. I
loved it. Another great piece.

[James K. Blaylock]

Love truly has a way of melting down our once frozen hearts. I really enjoyed reading this touching piece.

jkb