From My Wrists With Love [ACROSTIC]

Feelings of pain and anger
Run through my veins,
Opening my heart to a hatred
My heart has never before felt.  I hate

 

Myself and all that I am.  I
Yearn for the day that someone

 

Will want me; someone will
Receive me with open arms.  But
It seems that the
Somebody I long for will never
Think of me as anything more than a
Stupid, easy, cheap piece of trash.

 

What else is there for me to do?
I know nothing about being happy -
This pain is all I know.
How do you not wish for Death when

 

Love has failed you?  For me, it is all
Over and I slit my wrists,
Various thoughts running through my head,
Each confirming that this is the end...

 

Copyright©JosieWentzel28April2008
 

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

You express such sorrowful emotion in vivid, heartfelt words of loss (drowning as it were in a pool of pain). Again, you rise so powerfully above the form (acrostic) and create a piece that flows perfectly. Such sorrow, such pain no one should have to endure...

[Daisy]

Oh wow, this is really cool, well in a sense that the writing is cool, not a cool thing to do. I'm knowing what you mean and don't know the answer yet. Is it about being in the right place at the right time or is it about meeting by accident? I don't know but do know the pain you feel.

[Daisy]

Oh wow, this is really cool, well in a sense that the writing is cool, not a cool thing to do. I'm knowing what you mean and don't know the answer yet. Is it about being in the right place at the right time or is it about meeting by accident? I don't know but do know the pain you feel.