Forver is too Short

You know I love ya!!!!

Colours swirl lazily,

Running across the pages;

Amazing pictures flash

In my mind's eye, testimony to your

Greatness.

 

Forever can never be long enough; the

Rest of my life is too short -

Our friendship is what I treasure the

Most in this world

And when I say "I love you",

No truer words have ever passed my lips...

 

CopyrightJosieWentzel01May2008

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Nicely written, the imagery is lovely. The flow and rhythm could use a little work because there are a few parts there the transitions are slightly awkward. But this is a very emotional and descriptive piece. Well done.

[chris' girlfriend]

such a sweet poem :)

[a Messenger]

I agree with Craig. Beautifully conceived and brilliantly written.

[An owl on the moon]

You amaze me, my dear friend! Your love and devotion are a testament to the depth and beauty of your soul!!! This is so wonderful!!!!!!!