Until You No Longer Exist

Teenafge rantings

How are we supposed to

Communicate how we feel,

Or what we need,

If no one ever listens?

How can we be more tolerant

When others continuously

Irritate the crap out of us

And refuse to be tolerant with us?

And how can we not allow

Ourselves to be abused

When others find such pleasure in it,

And will continue to do so

Until you no longer exist?

 

Copyright©JosieWentzel26July2004

 

Reviews

[Enigma]

A very thoughtful piece indeed. You've raised those questions that are being asked by everybody these days, especially teens. (I can say that because I AM a teen..lol)
I can fully relate to the first eigth lines. I've been asking these questions since a long time.I think this is one of those poem everybody should read. It might give them an insight as to what must be done in order to improve the current situations...
I loved it!! Great Write!!!