The Other Woman (ACROSTIC)

I picked a title out of a hat...

There she was,

Holding his hand -

Evelyn was her name.

 

Orange flames flickered in front of my eyes

The rage building inside.  Why

Her and not me?

Evil b***h, I hope she

Rots in Hell…

 

Why do I always end up being “the

Other woman”?

Mark my words

As I screams this out loud -

NEVER AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Copyright©josieWentzel19June2008

 

Reviews

[Berserker[Diktator Von ..]

As serious as this subject was..it was a great piece..one where you cant help but chuckle at certain points...This was a great piece...=)

[An owl on the moon]

Amazingly poignant, emotional acrostic that shows so vividly the pain of being left on the outside as someone's pleasure but not a one true love... We all need to feel loved and wanted by someone who sees no one but us as the sun, moon, and stars... You deserve no less...